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What's with ponies dropping things these days?
PART 2: [link]
Some thoughts:
- This took some piece of time... Around 15 hours I think.
- I wanted to try something new, so I drew the action from few angles (takes more time, and doesn't let you copypasta, hehe)
- If you guess Applejack's face in 3rd panel is based of
you're right.
- Applejack's hair covered her eye, so I had to make "anime eyes" to show her rage... I'm not sure how this "maneuver" calls. And does it work properly?
- Idea based on FRIENDS episode.
Oh, and a friendly reminder: Don't kiss your friend's sister in front of him/her.
PART 2: [link]
Some thoughts:
- This took some piece of time... Around 15 hours I think.
- I wanted to try something new, so I drew the action from few angles (takes more time, and doesn't let you copypasta, hehe)
- If you guess Applejack's face in 3rd panel is based of
you're right.- Applejack's hair covered her eye, so I had to make "anime eyes" to show her rage... I'm not sure how this "maneuver" calls. And does it work properly?
- Idea based on FRIENDS episode.
Oh, and a friendly reminder: Don't kiss your friend's sister in front of him/her.
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Overall
Vision Originality
Technique ImpactFirst of all - good job with that silly joke, that You used to make this comic. Not only that you making fun from shipping (I really don't like shipping arts) but also You used pretty old joke from "FRIENDS".
Secondly - nice usage of that font, it fits this one perfectly. It is also very visible and looks nice and smooth.
Thirdly - technique... and here bad things begin. You sometimes loose proportions (look at the Applejack's hat at first and third panel and compare them with secound one - it is oversized). There are few places where we got sharp edges instead of curved ones. On secound panel You totally messed up Applejack's body - left fore-hoof looks like it is not attached to her body. Also her "proper body" is little bit longer on that panel (it could be illusion caused by that "hoof error"). And last error... Applejack Rage Face looks... weird... There were many possibilities to do that rage face but You simply didn't seen them (for example - You could put her hair up, to look more like burning Twilight's mane in "Feeling Pinkie Keen").
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